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  1. Posted: November 24, 2014In: Public

    A young journalist must turn detective when he gets caught up in the fatal conspiracy behind the Jack the Ripper murders.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on November 24, 2014 at 1:30 pm

    "...gets caught up in the fatal conspiracy..." is a vague description of an inciting incident. what exactly was it that got him caught up? Did someone frame him? Is his life threatened somehow? etc... Hope this helps.

    “…gets caught up in the fatal conspiracy…” is a vague description of an inciting incident. what exactly was it that got him caught up?

    Did someone frame him? Is his life threatened somehow? etc…

    Hope this helps.

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  2. Posted: November 21, 2014In: Public

    "When an upperclass single mom gets her baby kidnapped by it's father, she has to enter the dark forest and hunt the vicious hunter down to get her baby back."

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    Added an answer on November 24, 2014 at 9:14 am

    I see. If this is set in present day what is stopping the mother from alerting the authorities? Surely the police could help. Perhaps leverage modern medical technology and state that the child is in need of dialysis and have them live in a remote village. Then even if the police rush over it couldRead more

    I see.

    If this is set in present day what is stopping the mother from alerting the authorities? Surely the police could help.

    Perhaps leverage modern medical technology and state that the child is in need of dialysis and have them live in a remote village. Then even if the police rush over it could be too late so the mother has to pursue the father herself to save the child.

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  3. Posted: November 21, 2014In: Public

    "When an upperclass single mom gets her baby kidnapped by it's father, she has to enter the dark forest and hunt the vicious hunter down to get her baby back."

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on November 24, 2014 at 9:14 am

    I see. If this is set in present day what is stopping the mother from alerting the authorities? Surely the police could help. Perhaps leverage modern medical technology and state that the child is in need of dialysis and have them live in a remote village. Then even if the police rush over it couldRead more

    I see.

    If this is set in present day what is stopping the mother from alerting the authorities? Surely the police could help.

    Perhaps leverage modern medical technology and state that the child is in need of dialysis and have them live in a remote village. Then even if the police rush over it could be too late so the mother has to pursue the father herself to save the child.

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