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  1. Posted: September 7, 2014In: Public

    As a fascist state that controls the GMO tech that feeds the population seeks to secure its hold on power, the poorer farmers and climate refugees in the south embark on a secret mission to get back natural seeds from a heavily fortified island.

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    Added an answer on September 8, 2014 at 11:25 am

    It's not clear who or what the story is about from the logline. Also vague descriptions such as "...seeks to secure its hold on power," don't describe a clear visual danger because depends on the type of fascist state this could be interpreted in many different ways. As previously mentioned who is tRead more

    It’s not clear who or what the story is about from the logline.

    Also vague descriptions such as “…seeks to secure its hold on power,” don’t describe a clear visual danger because depends on the type of fascist state this could be interpreted in many different ways.

    As previously mentioned who is the MC? What is the goal? What is the obstacle? and what re the stakes?

    Hope this helps.

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  2. Posted: September 7, 2014In: Public

    When an out of work teacher is given a deadline by a loan shark, he contracts a hit-man on himself so his family can collect on his life insurance. However after he befriends the hit-man they decide to fake his death instead.

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    Added an answer on September 8, 2014 at 11:20 am

    Before they decide to fake his death. The story happens from when the teacher is given the deadline from the loan shark and up until they fake his death.

    Before they decide to fake his death.
    The story happens from when the teacher is given the deadline from the loan shark and up until they fake his death.

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  3. Posted: September 7, 2014In: Public

    When an out of work teacher is given a deadline by a loan shark, he contracts a hit-man on himself so his family can collect on his life insurance. However after he befriends the hit-man they decide to fake his death instead.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on September 8, 2014 at 11:20 am

    Before they decide to fake his death. The story happens from when the teacher is given the deadline from the loan shark and up until they fake his death.

    Before they decide to fake his death.
    The story happens from when the teacher is given the deadline from the loan shark and up until they fake his death.

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