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A bitter fight for power and control over the underground music market, leaves two men exposed to an unlikely aggressive takeover.
I personally like movies about the music industry as they have much scope for humor and comic relief whilst playing with the mystified "rock stars" we all learn to admire in our youth. Not sure what "...the underground music market..." is perhaps better to choose a market most people will be able toRead more
I personally like movies about the music industry as they have much scope for humor and comic relief whilst playing with the mystified “rock stars” we all learn to admire in our youth.
Not sure what “…the underground music market…” is perhaps better to choose a market most people will be able to understand and relate to easier.
Also “A bitter fight for power and control…” sounds vague because it can be interpreted in many different ways not to forget that the logline didn’t specify an MC.
If this is a dual protagonist plot then there is an added complication already from the fact that it is not about one MC. With the added vague nature of the above the logline doesn’t describe enough for the reader to have a clear understanding of the story.
A something happens to a main character that must achieve a goal despite a clear obstacle to save the day.
Hope this helps.
See lessA bitter fight for power and control over the underground music market, leaves two men exposed to an unlikely aggressive takeover.
I personally like movies about the music industry as they have much scope for humor and comic relief whilst playing with the mystified "rock stars" we all learn to admire in our youth. Not sure what "...the underground music market..." is perhaps better to choose a market most people will be able toRead more
I personally like movies about the music industry as they have much scope for humor and comic relief whilst playing with the mystified “rock stars” we all learn to admire in our youth.
Not sure what “…the underground music market…” is perhaps better to choose a market most people will be able to understand and relate to easier.
Also “A bitter fight for power and control…” sounds vague because it can be interpreted in many different ways not to forget that the logline didn’t specify an MC.
If this is a dual protagonist plot then there is an added complication already from the fact that it is not about one MC. With the added vague nature of the above the logline doesn’t describe enough for the reader to have a clear understanding of the story.
A something happens to a main character that must achieve a goal despite a clear obstacle to save the day.
Hope this helps.
See lessIdentiical Twins living in the Post-Apocalyptic Caribbean have their village attacked by pirates, one of them is taken and the village is destroyed; unable to make contact one devotes his life to saving his brother while the other slowly becomes identical to the very pirates that pillaged his town.
The base idea is interesting if your story is about "...how two identical people in different circumstances can become completely different.". However I think you may be adding unnecessary complications to the story with the setting as there is no inherent need for the apocalyptic archipelago locatiRead more
The base idea is interesting if your story is about “…how two identical people in different circumstances can become completely different.”.
However I think you may be adding unnecessary complications to the story with the setting as there is no inherent need for the apocalyptic archipelago location.
More so this specific type of post Apocalypse doesn’t conjure up in my mind an image as clear as other post Apocalypse settings such as; Mad Max 2 – out back Australia, THX1138 – underground urban USA, Snow piercer – future ice age, etc…
See lessClosest I can think of to this is; Water World which, location aside, simply didn’t work as a movie.