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After a road accident brings the untimely end to a man?s life, he now has a second chance at life (and love) by completing a series of tasks set by an evil spirit boss.
Loglines are about telling the story in the FEWEST number of sentences and words as is possible, while still making the essentials clear. I would strongly recommend AGAINST adding two more sentences, Zizou23.
Loglines are about telling the story in the FEWEST number of sentences and words as is possible, while still making the essentials clear. I would strongly recommend AGAINST adding two more sentences, Zizou23.
See lessAfter buying the dwelling of a 20th century occultist, a young father loses all that he loves when dealing with his irrational motives – triggering deathly consequences in order to stop finally his aggravator.
I literally have no idea what happens in your film, other than your protagonist (a young father - is there anything that can describe him better? An immature father? An irresponsible? Inexperienced?) buys a house that used to belong to an occultist. Once he owns the house, what does he do, who is trRead more
I literally have no idea what happens in your film, other than your protagonist (a young father – is there anything that can describe him better? An immature father? An irresponsible? Inexperienced?) buys a house that used to belong to an occultist.
Once he owns the house, what does he do, who is trying to stop him (an aggravator? That’s way too vague) and what does he stand to lose? Does deathly consequences mean his life is what is at stake? What about the lives of his family?
See lessAfter a road accident brings the untimely end to a man?s life, he now has a second chance at life (and love) by completing a series of tasks set by an evil spirit boss.
The first half of your logline is unnecessarily wordy. "After dying in a car accident ..." The next part seems to have the right elements; an antagonist, a goal (return to Earth, or life, or the world of the living." I would suggest a clean up to something like. "After dying in a car accident, a (flRead more
The first half of your logline is unnecessarily wordy.
“After dying in a car accident …”
The next part seems to have the right elements; an antagonist, a goal (return to Earth, or life, or the world of the living.” I would suggest a clean up to something like.
“After dying in a car accident, a (flawed protagonist) must defeat the evil spirit which guards the portal to the world of the living.”
Also … could the stakes be higher? Is there something your protagonist – of whom I know very little at this stage – wants to come back to life to achieve?
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