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When the world’s economic system collapses causing great social upheaval, a rising political savior steps in with a new economic idea where all economy is stored inside the human body, beginning the formation of a powerful Governmental global revolution and resulting in one of the greatest tribulation periods of all time.
So, like the movies Left Behind? (currently being remade with Nic Cage). You didn't even mention the protagonist in your logline. Without that, there is no story. Just a world, just a concept. Who is your protagonist, what is their goal, what are the stakes?
So, like the movies Left Behind? (currently being remade with Nic Cage).
You didn’t even mention the protagonist in your logline. Without that, there is no story. Just a world, just a concept. Who is your protagonist, what is their goal, what are the stakes?
See lessAn FBI agent must stop a victim of an alien abduction – modified into superhuman seeking revenge to his creators – before he starts an intergalactic war.
What is the event that kicks this story off?
What is the event that kicks this story off?
See lessTwo aliens assigned to monitor earth can bring in only one earthen TV channel, TV Land. They become enamored of the stars of the 50's. When at last they are allowed to land, they assume the identities of the persons they have seen on their one channel. They are dismayed to learn the transition from outer space to earth ages them tremendously. They roam the population without effort until they encounter their dopplegangers.
Your first problem is trying to juggle multiple protagonists. Pick one, and tell us what their goal is once they are on the earth.
Your first problem is trying to juggle multiple protagonists. Pick one, and tell us what their goal is once they are on the earth.
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