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  1. Posted: July 22, 2013In: Public

    Twelve-year old twin sisters, jealous of their father?s affection for his new bride, plot to do away with the untested stepmother, not knowing that she has similar plans for them.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on July 25, 2013 at 5:31 pm

    The Parent (Death) Trap

    The Parent (Death) Trap

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  2. Posted: July 23, 2013In: Public

    A young woman, kidnapped when she was a kid, returns home to the family she barely remembers and struggles to feel ?at home.?

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on July 25, 2013 at 5:29 pm

    I agree with the above. Engaging premise, but I don't see what is actually happening in your story.

    I agree with the above. Engaging premise, but I don’t see what is actually happening in your story.

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  3. Posted: July 23, 2013In: Public

    After falling victim to a humiliating prank by the high school Queen Bee, best friends and world-class geeks, Mindy and Jodi, decide to get their revenge by uniting the outcasts of the school against her and her circle of friends.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on July 25, 2013 at 5:26 pm

    I'm unclear as to what the goal is. They unite some people ... then what? What am I watching? Am I watching some gruesome horror film about a schoolful of kids torturing the cool kids? Am I watching "Drive Me Crazy", and the bit where they broadcast video of the "in" kids behaving badly so everyoneRead more

    I’m unclear as to what the goal is. They unite some people … then what? What am I watching? Am I watching some gruesome horror film about a schoolful of kids torturing the cool kids? Am I watching “Drive Me Crazy”, and the bit where they broadcast video of the “in” kids behaving badly so everyone can see how broken they are? What is the goal? What are the stakes of failure?

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