1. Posted: July 31, 2013In:

    In exchange for escaping a house haunted by a demon, a group of teenaged friends must vote to decide which one of them must stay behind to be killed.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai

    So the first act is them escaping the house and the last two acts are them sitting down and discussing who has to stay behind? The concept sounds a little like "Final Destination" - you can't cheat death, the score has to be settled. But I have to admit I think it would be a really slow movie, and tRead more

    So the first act is them escaping the house and the last two acts are them sitting down and discussing who has to stay behind? The concept sounds a little like “Final Destination” – you can’t cheat death, the score has to be settled. But I have to admit I think it would be a really slow movie, and the idea doesn’t grab me.

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  2. Posted: July 31, 2013In:

    A young girl who has lived her entire life in a laboratory as the subject of an experiment, is kidnapped by a scientist who wants her to have a few days of a real childhood before she dies.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai

    Can you tell us anything more about her, character wise, than that she is young? Who is the protagonist, the girl or the scientist? This logline feels like the setup for a film, but as I can't identify who the protagonist is, nor their goal, it's hard to tell what I'd actually be watching. (I do knoRead more

    Can you tell us anything more about her, character wise, than that she is young?

    Who is the protagonist, the girl or the scientist? This logline feels like the setup for a film, but as I can’t identify who the protagonist is, nor their goal, it’s hard to tell what I’d actually be watching. (I do know the scientist’s motivation, but not much else).

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  3. Posted: July 31, 2013In:

    A mentally challenged teen who is imprisoned because he accidentally murdered somebody falls in love with his therapist against her better judgment

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai

    Agreed with Richiev that you should look into both those issues. Also; I want to hear in the logline the event that landed him in the mental hospital; this could either suggest an internal journey for an audience, or provide the irony that would make this character pop right out of the logline and iRead more

    Agreed with Richiev that you should look into both those issues.

    Also; I want to hear in the logline the event that landed him in the mental hospital; this could either suggest an internal journey for an audience, or provide the irony that would make this character pop right out of the logline and into my imagination.

    Otherwise, an interesting premise.

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