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  1. Posted: June 14, 2013In: Public

    Some old-styled black magician migrants are suspected for the mysterious death of a boy, and their houses burnt down; but soon these good people turn back to life as the undead due to their powers and are hungry for revenge from the entire town.

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    Added an answer on June 17, 2013 at 3:25 pm

    It's all the setup for every freddy krueger film ever done, but again, the focus is on the teenagers, they're not freddy's stories.

    It’s all the setup for every freddy krueger film ever done, but again, the focus is on the teenagers, they’re not freddy’s stories.

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  2. Posted: June 16, 2013In: Public

    A soldier called "Belaid" decides to go to war in Sahara and fights alone because he failes his first love. Rejected by death, a ghost "his father" suddenly appears to him, just to advise him to leave his place to find another love "Zahra" When ? Belaid ? meets her ,both confront fierce and an ambitious enemy named "Laaouar.",

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on June 17, 2013 at 3:24 pm

    Whoa, way too confusing. I don't understand what is happening here at all. Just keep it simple, don't give me names. Who is your protagonist? A soldier - what sort of soldier? A grizzled veteran? A bright eyed new recruit? Be clear about who they are, and what their PRIMARY, outward goal in the storRead more

    Whoa, way too confusing. I don’t understand what is happening here at all. Just keep it simple, don’t give me names. Who is your protagonist? A soldier – what sort of soldier? A grizzled veteran? A bright eyed new recruit? Be clear about who they are, and what their PRIMARY, outward goal in the story is.

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  3. Posted: June 17, 2013In: Public

    A woman who is afraid of the dark learns that it is not being afraid of the unknown, it is being afraid of the unseen.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on June 17, 2013 at 3:20 pm

    You've given us a character and a flaw, and hinted at some of the inner journey (fearing the unseen). What is your character's goal, what is stopping them from achieving that goal, and what are the stakes of failure? Richiev has provided some great ideas.

    You’ve given us a character and a flaw, and hinted at some of the inner journey (fearing the unseen). What is your character’s goal, what is stopping them from achieving that goal, and what are the stakes of failure? Richiev has provided some great ideas.

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