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Some old-styled black magician migrants are suspected for the mysterious death of a boy, and their houses burnt down; but soon these good people turn back to life as the undead due to their powers and are hungry for revenge from the entire town.
Who are your protagonists? Townsfolk trying to escape the undead vengeance being wreaked upon them, or the migrants themselves? (I haven't seen many movies where the undead are the protagonists, so this makes it interesting to me - more interesting than the unsuspecting townsfolk).
Who are your protagonists? Townsfolk trying to escape the undead vengeance being wreaked upon them, or the migrants themselves? (I haven’t seen many movies where the undead are the protagonists, so this makes it interesting to me – more interesting than the unsuspecting townsfolk).
See lessBrought together in the shadow of teleportation and world faith, neither Rupert nor Levi thought to save humanity; one must, before the other does.
I second (third?) the comments already made regarding the logline, but would also suggest when you do your next draft, to try and keep it clear who your protagonist is (is the audience watching a film about Rupert or Levi?)
I second (third?) the comments already made regarding the logline, but would also suggest when you do your next draft, to try and keep it clear who your protagonist is (is the audience watching a film about Rupert or Levi?)
See lessWhile waiting for a mechanic, a prize fighting luchador is forced to defend his broken down van from a wild chupacabra.
For what it's worth, I'm hooked and would buy a ticket today if I had the chance. The above points out an interesting issue though - the stakes need to be higher than defending the van. Couldn't he just run away? What's IN the van that he's trying to protect? (FAMILY?)
For what it’s worth, I’m hooked and would buy a ticket today if I had the chance.
The above points out an interesting issue though – the stakes need to be higher than defending the van. Couldn’t he just run away? What’s IN the van that he’s trying to protect? (FAMILY?)
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