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A strange parallelepipoid of darkness causes the dawn of humanity then much later its access to a higher level of consciousness
I wouldn't watch this because it doesn't really give me an idea of the hook, or what I'm likely to see. What was Dave trying to achieve and why? Where did HIS journey begin?
I wouldn’t watch this because it doesn’t really give me an idea of the hook, or what I’m likely to see. What was Dave trying to achieve and why? Where did HIS journey begin?
See lessWhen the body of the Mayor's son is discovered on the reservation and a young indian is accused, the local cop must go back to his own Indian culture to solve the case and learn to accept his own heritage.
I think the story is intriguing - if nothing else, seems we're all in agreement about that. (So definitely write this bad boy!) I think Tony's version is tighter, but agree with him that "uncovering more than the case" doesn't work particularly well. So maybe try working the beginning of his loglineRead more
I think the story is intriguing – if nothing else, seems we’re all in agreement about that. (So definitely write this bad boy!)
I think Tony’s version is tighter, but agree with him that “uncovering more than the case” doesn’t work particularly well. So maybe try working the beginning of his logline draft into a new version of your own?
Great work Louise.
See lessButtoned-down 20-something Eric isn?t ready to marry his longtime girlfriend Abby. His only way out is through slacker Sam, his identical twin brother, who offers to pose as Eric to do the dumping. But the plan becomes a disaster when Sam realizes Abby is actually really cool–and falls head over heels for her…
I dig the hell out of this idea, but I can't see how it's going to sustain 90 mins of screentime. What happens after the initial realization? Is that something that happens in act 3? I don't get a good sense of how this movie works. Also, is Eric the protagonist, or Sam?
I dig the hell out of this idea, but I can’t see how it’s going to sustain 90 mins of screentime. What happens after the initial realization? Is that something that happens in act 3? I don’t get a good sense of how this movie works. Also, is Eric the protagonist, or Sam?
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