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  1. Posted: May 20, 2013In: Public

    When a downtrodden street-dweller uncovers an underground humanoid-reptilian race’s conspiracy to enslave humanity, he risks his own life to protect that of an innocent little boy.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on May 22, 2013 at 2:55 pm

    I certainly hope you don't make the hobo into the world's saviour. I like seeing movies about small, personal stories set against the backdrop of insane, world changing events (like Monsters). You do need a clear antagonist though, and it also makes me think Aliens is a good basis for draw from. TheRead more

    I certainly hope you don’t make the hobo into the world’s saviour.

    I like seeing movies about small, personal stories set against the backdrop of insane, world changing events (like Monsters).

    You do need a clear antagonist though, and it also makes me think Aliens is a good basis for draw from. They very clearly created a “leader” for the Aliens, someone who Ripley had to beat in order for the story to be over (it works even better that she was a Queen protecting her own young). What if the leader of this group of reptilians was an outcast from his own society, in order to mirror your hobo’s plight?

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  2. Posted: May 20, 2013In: Public

    An aging hitman goes up against his boss over a single night in order to protect his family.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on May 22, 2013 at 2:49 pm

    Why? Why is the boss coming after his family?

    Why? Why is the boss coming after his family?

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  3. Posted: May 20, 2013In: Public

    An elementary school student searches for the truth behind the candy bar ring conspiracy that got his brother expelled.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on May 22, 2013 at 2:49 pm

    Yep, Richiev is right. What are the stakes?

    Yep, Richiev is right. What are the stakes?

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