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A murdered chess champion challenges heaven to save her brother from becoming her killer?s next victim.
The stakes are clear. Is the film a 90 min long chess game? I don't think the premise has legs for a feature. Also ... who specifically in heaven? Is it a Bill and Ted's Bogus Journey type scenario, where she plays the Grim Reaper? Also ... I assume that when you say they challenge heaven ... you meRead more
The stakes are clear. Is the film a 90 min long chess game? I don’t think the premise has legs for a feature. Also … who specifically in heaven? Is it a Bill and Ted’s Bogus Journey type scenario, where she plays the Grim Reaper?
Also … I assume that when you say they challenge heaven … you mean “to a chess game” … because I’ve just assumed that. For all I know your murder victim rallies an army and marches against the throne. You need to clarify.
What else do you know about your protagonist? What is their flaw? How will them overcoming that flaw allow them to save their brother? In fact, how will beating heaven (again, assuming it’s a chess game) allow the brother’s life to be spared?
Confusing and disjointed.
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It means the attorney thinks that the firm he worked for killed people so that they could scare other people to sell up their land. (I assume).
It means the attorney thinks that the firm he worked for killed people so that they could scare other people to sell up their land. (I assume).
See lessIn the year 3024, Anthony Shaw is a reckless entrepreneur living in a society where the less money you have, the longer you live. After hacking into the system and inventing an illegal money tracker, he becomes the only man on earth to successfully lose his living- Which makes him not only the longest living man on earth, but the most wanted man in the Universe. Anthony now has to abandon earth and uncover the corrupt system to have a chance at surviving ( I know its a very long logline, that's why i'm posting in here to gain some advice)(This would be one of many Films)
I was going to make the "In Time" connection ... with the exception in that film as people want to live longer, it makes sense that they would want to accumulate and protect their wealth, because their lifespan is tied to their fortunes. Your premise works on the reverse ... so if you wanted to keepRead more
I was going to make the “In Time” connection … with the exception in that film as people want to live longer, it makes sense that they would want to accumulate and protect their wealth, because their lifespan is tied to their fortunes.
Your premise works on the reverse … so if you wanted to keep living, you could just give away all your money. Which removes any sort of central dilemma. If someone doesn’t want to die, they just give their money away. As cynosurer suggests, the central conceit is kind of baffling.
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