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When a suitcase full of 'dirty money' falls from a balcony along with a Japanese businessman, a penniless young Londoner steals the case, a Yakuza enforcer is sent to track him down and an epic battle begins on the streets of East London.
I think storyutbildningen's version of the logline is tighter. "When a penniless London raver (?) gets his hands on a suitcase full of money, he must escape the Yakuza agent sent to retrieve it." Which reveals to us a gap in the logline - WHY? Why must he escape? Why not just give it back? Why shoulRead more
I think storyutbildningen’s version of the logline is tighter.
“When a penniless London raver (?) gets his hands on a suitcase full of money, he must escape the Yakuza agent sent to retrieve it.”
Which reveals to us a gap in the logline – WHY? Why must he escape? Why not just give it back? Why should I feel sorry for him, just because he’s poor, if his life is in danger? Perhaps he’s not just penniless – the threat of a Yakuza enacted death needs to pale in comparison to the fate he will suffer WITHOUT the money.
See lessWhen a Midsummer celebration turns into a hostage situation, a washed up writer must save his friends and family from being killed by a quintet of desperate bankrobbers.
How is the midsummer celebration interrupted by the bank robbers? Why is the writer not at the party with his friends, such that he is not caught? Why would a writer possess the skills to save them - is he a washed up crime writer? Did he write Die Hard knock offs and now he has to prove he has theRead more
How is the midsummer celebration interrupted by the bank robbers? Why is the writer not at the party with his friends, such that he is not caught? Why would a writer possess the skills to save them – is he a washed up crime writer? Did he write Die Hard knock offs and now he has to prove he has the chops? (Kind of Die Hard meets The Three Amigos in that sense). Why is it up to the writer and not the cops? Are the thieves really murderers as well?
See lessWhen mourning, asocial Josef is stuck with his car in the middle of nowhere he must drive a young, rebellious punkgirl to an audition in order to get home
"When an asocial taxidermist (? no need for his name, who is he? What does he do?) is stranded in the middle of nowhere he strikes up a deal with a rebellious punk to drive her to an audition in order to get home." What is he mourning? What is the travel deal exactly? Isn't his car broken? How is heRead more
“When an asocial taxidermist (? no need for his name, who is he? What does he do?) is stranded in the middle of nowhere he strikes up a deal with a rebellious punk to drive her to an audition in order to get home.”
What is he mourning? What is the travel deal exactly? Isn’t his car broken? How is he going to drive her? Is it her car? In which case, why doesn’t she just drive herself? What sort of audition is it? Why does the protagonist need to get home so bad?
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