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  1. Posted: September 6, 2012In: Public

    "After his regular blood supply dries up, a pacifist vampire must rob a mobile blood bank."

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on September 6, 2012 at 5:35 pm

    yep - "before the animal hunger takes over." It clarifies the stakes and adds in a ticking clock. Perfect. I'm going to submit this one tomorrow and we'll see what the world has to say :)

    yep – “before the animal hunger takes over.” It clarifies the stakes and adds in a ticking clock. Perfect. I’m going to submit this one tomorrow and we’ll see what the world has to say 🙂

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  2. Posted: September 6, 2012In: Public

    Years after his son?s murder, the leader of a vigilante gang trains a new recruit to take over his ?work?, but the young AWOL commando is on a mission of his own.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on September 6, 2012 at 4:04 pm

    This sounds good to me. Is there a way to indicate the "mission" that the AWOL commando is on will come into direct conflict with that of the vigilante? If not, I'd say you've got it working pretty tight.

    This sounds good to me. Is there a way to indicate the “mission” that the AWOL commando is on will come into direct conflict with that of the vigilante? If not, I’d say you’ve got it working pretty tight.

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  3. Posted: September 6, 2012In: Examples

    When a high school chemistry teacher struggling financially is diagnosed with cancer and health insurance wont cover the cost of treatment, he turns to cooking and selling crystal meth to secure a financial future for his family

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on September 6, 2012 at 4:02 pm

    Nailed it.

    Nailed it.

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