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When her prison transport plane crashes, a lawyer wrongfully accused of fraud, must avoid the FBI and escape from the vengeful husband who framed her to realize her dream.
First of all, I don't know what you mean by 'prison transport plane'. Is she being transported to or from the prison, or between prisons? Is she going there in the capacity as a lawyer or as a prisoner? I'm confused by the event that sets your story into motion. You MUST be less vague about the protRead more
First of all, I don’t know what you mean by ‘prison transport plane’. Is she being transported to or from the prison, or between prisons? Is she going there in the capacity as a lawyer or as a prisoner? I’m confused by the event that sets your story into motion.
You MUST be less vague about the protagonist’s goal. I don’t know what “realize the dream” looks like, so I can’t visualise what type of movie you’re thinking about writing / making, nor do I see what your character is going to do for the middle hour or so of the movie (aside from avoid the authorities). What is the objective?
See lessWhen her prison transport plane crashes, a lawyer wrongfully accused of fraud, must avoid the FBI and escape from the vengeful husband who framed her to realize her dream.
First of all, I don't know what you mean by 'prison transport plane'. Is she being transported to or from the prison, or between prisons? Is she going there in the capacity as a lawyer or as a prisoner? I'm confused by the event that sets your story into motion. You MUST be less vague about the protRead more
First of all, I don’t know what you mean by ‘prison transport plane’. Is she being transported to or from the prison, or between prisons? Is she going there in the capacity as a lawyer or as a prisoner? I’m confused by the event that sets your story into motion.
You MUST be less vague about the protagonist’s goal. I don’t know what “realize the dream” looks like, so I can’t visualise what type of movie you’re thinking about writing / making, nor do I see what your character is going to do for the middle hour or so of the movie (aside from avoid the authorities). What is the objective?
See lessIn order to create a replacement ?Master Vampire? after his is accidentally killed, a perfectionist thrall has 48 hours to steal and consume the blood of 100 virgins from a mobile high-school blood bank, before he and his master's other sons' powers wain, and they succumb to mortality.
After his master is left for dead by a brutal hunter, a pacifist vampire's servant must steal enough blood to prevent his family's death.
After his master is left for dead by a brutal hunter, a pacifist vampire’s servant must steal enough blood to prevent his family’s death.
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