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  1. Posted: August 27, 2013In: Public

    A coma patient has an out of body experience, and her spirit must reach her ancestral plot to enter Heaven, before the “Slow-Walker” takes her to Hell.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on August 27, 2013 at 11:48 am

    That's right man! And don't forget, everything you hear from us is, ultimately, opinions. Some might be correct, but nonetheless, it's up to you to decide how you will or won't write your logline :)

    That’s right man! And don’t forget, everything you hear from us is, ultimately, opinions. Some might be correct, but nonetheless, it’s up to you to decide how you will or won’t write your logline 🙂

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  2. Posted: August 25, 2013In: Public

    Sean Metcalfe is a family man first and salesman second. When a tragic car accident sets off a series of events, Sean will need to come up with the ultimate sales pitch to keep his family together.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on August 27, 2013 at 11:46 am

    What does the car accident have to do with the sales pitch? How are the stakes of a failed sales pitch the loss of his family?

    What does the car accident have to do with the sales pitch? How are the stakes of a failed sales pitch the loss of his family?

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  3. Posted: August 26, 2013In: Public

    William Van Alen?s building of the Chrysler building and the competition to be the first to complete the world?s tallest building.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on August 27, 2013 at 11:45 am

    I think you're spot on in that there is a story here - it's well known enough to have audience appeal, but it hasn't really been tackled yet. Still - dpg is totally right. This logline has put the premise into a logline, and as such it's kind of hard to understand how its story dynamics are going toRead more

    I think you’re spot on in that there is a story here – it’s well known enough to have audience appeal, but it hasn’t really been tackled yet. Still – dpg is totally right. This logline has put the premise into a logline, and as such it’s kind of hard to understand how its story dynamics are going to work.

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