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A coma patient has an out of body experience, and her spirit must reach her ancestral plot to enter Heaven, before the “Slow-Walker” takes her to Hell.
You're starting to over complicate your logline. Keep it clean and simple, so someone reads it and with no prior frame of reference, can understand what your film is about. What does it mean "to fulfill her destiny"? What are we seeing? What is the specific action or act that will fulfill said destiRead more
You’re starting to over complicate your logline. Keep it clean and simple, so someone reads it and with no prior frame of reference, can understand what your film is about.
What does it mean “to fulfill her destiny”? What are we seeing? What is the specific action or act that will fulfill said destiny?
How do you show someone visually and cinematically forgiving themselves?
You’ve got a goal; get to her ancestral plot. Why is that a difficult task for her to achieve?
You’ve got an antagonist; “the Slow-Walker” (although, if she’s got to beat this character in some sort of a race, his name is failing to strike fear into the heart of the reader). What is this character doing to stop your pro-ordained Christian from getting to their ancestral plot?
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I've never heard of these characters. The name recognition has not worked, and you've wasted words that could have been used to entice me to become emotionally invested in your story of flawed characters.
I’ve never heard of these characters. The name recognition has not worked, and you’ve wasted words that could have been used to entice me to become emotionally invested in your story of flawed characters.
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Still, what's the conflict here? How does the protagonist seek to overcome this obstacle?
Still, what’s the conflict here? How does the protagonist seek to overcome this obstacle?
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