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  1. Posted: August 24, 2013In: Public

    Three childhood friends mimic the devastating dynamics of their parental relationships while in pursuit of love. For one, when love turns to deceit, the family tradition of murder is the only retribution.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on August 24, 2013 at 12:40 pm

    Why do your protagonists base their relationships on their parental relationships? Isn't this what everybody on the planet does anyway? So the plot is about a character who murders their cheating spouse? Then what? Why would an audience empathise with this protagonist?

    Why do your protagonists base their relationships on their parental relationships? Isn’t this what everybody on the planet does anyway? So the plot is about a character who murders their cheating spouse? Then what? Why would an audience empathise with this protagonist?

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  2. Posted: August 24, 2013In: Public

    After selling their souls to a devil the name of Black, tall-tale legends Pecos Bill and Slue-foot Sue must elude a hell bound fate as well as every cowboy trying to sell ?em out to that varmint.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on August 24, 2013 at 12:36 pm

    What has put their souls in danger? What does evading the devil look like?

    What has put their souls in danger? What does evading the devil look like?

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  3. Posted: August 24, 2013In: Public

    A hipster quest for "transcendent" duck tacos is derailed when a failed chef turned health inspector closes the duck truck down.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on August 24, 2013 at 12:34 pm

    Is this the event or the action? (The set up or the story?)

    Is this the event or the action? (The set up or the story?)

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