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  1. Posted: August 16, 2013In: Public

    When a lonely, middle-aged Aussie long-distance truckie finds love online with a city girl, he must overcome his fear of losing what he loves most to win her heart.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on August 20, 2013 at 11:49 am

    What about if the girl was an agoraphobic? Potential for conflict, and plays into your desire to have the truckie "give up his freedom" for love. The truck itself is the representation of freedom in this story; by selling it, it's making the statement that he's ready to settle down. I agree with dpgRead more

    What about if the girl was an agoraphobic? Potential for conflict, and plays into your desire to have the truckie “give up his freedom” for love. The truck itself is the representation of freedom in this story; by selling it, it’s making the statement that he’s ready to settle down. I agree with dpg – the truck is not an antagonist (unless it is sentient – like the car in Knightrider, but I’m guess that’s not the vibe you’re going for).

    You still face the problem of there being no antagonist though …

    “After his soul mate turns out to be an agoraphobic, a free-spirited trucker sells his rig to prove his love.” Still … antagonists, right?

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  2. Posted: August 16, 2013In: Public

    When a village is plagued by beetles that eat colour, an artist grieving the loss of his daughter ventures into the nearby jungle to save a flower which is the only source of a certain shade of blue.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on August 20, 2013 at 11:40 am

    Very helpful, thanks mate.

    Very helpful, thanks mate.

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  3. Posted: August 17, 2013In: Public

    When a governmental Space Station gets taken by a terrorist organisation, its headstrong Chief Architect must escape upon learning that the terrorists have also kidnapped her disabled husband back on earth.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on August 19, 2013 at 4:53 pm

    "The headstrong architect of an advanced space station must abandon it to terrorists when she learns they have also kidnapped her disabled husband."

    “The headstrong architect of an advanced space station must abandon it to terrorists when she learns they have also kidnapped her disabled husband.”

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