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  1. Posted: August 16, 2013In: Public

    When a village is plagued by beetles that eat colour, an artist grieving the loss of his daughter ventures into the nearby jungle to save a flower which is the only source of a certain shade of blue.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on August 19, 2013 at 1:11 pm

    Thanks wilsondownunder. I was actually thinking live action - kind of a Wes Anderson / Michel Gondry vibe to it I am working on including an antagonist - you're right, the conflict is just not high enough in the logline as it is. I'm thinking an entomologist that is fighting for the beetles' interesRead more

    Thanks wilsondownunder. I was actually thinking live action – kind of a Wes Anderson / Michel Gondry vibe to it

    I am working on including an antagonist – you’re right, the conflict is just not high enough in the logline as it is. I’m thinking an entomologist that is fighting for the beetles’ interests.

    The flower links in a thematic way to the daughter’s death. His outer journey – to save this beautiful plant from extinction – is the process of him having to learn to let go of grief; reflecting the inner journey to learn that a natural part of living is dying, and you can’t hold on to things once nature decides their end.

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  2. Posted: August 16, 2013In: Public

    When a village is plagued by beetles that eat colour, an artist grieving the loss of his daughter ventures into the nearby jungle to save a flower which is the only source of a certain shade of blue.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on August 19, 2013 at 1:06 pm

    I'll utilise "painter" as a description, because this is more accurate, but the protagonist definitely needs to be described as grieving to explain the thematic link between his inner journey and the stakes of the story (trying to stop something from dying, essentially).

    I’ll utilise “painter” as a description, because this is more accurate, but the protagonist definitely needs to be described as grieving to explain the thematic link between his inner journey and the stakes of the story (trying to stop something from dying, essentially).

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  3. Posted: August 16, 2013In: Public

    When a village is plagued by beetles that eat colour, an artist grieving the loss of his daughter ventures into the nearby jungle to save a flower which is the only source of a certain shade of blue.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on August 19, 2013 at 1:05 pm

    Thanks mate. Means a lot.

    Thanks mate. Means a lot.

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