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The last shaman "Medicine Man" of the Peruvian Amazon Highland jungle, who cures his patients of terminal diseases using plants native to the Amazon Jungle.
You have only given us a concept; you have not indicated a goal, antagonist or stakes. Also; is the medicine man your main character, or is he the mentor that your protagonist meets?
You have only given us a concept; you have not indicated a goal, antagonist or stakes. Also; is the medicine man your main character, or is he the mentor that your protagonist meets?
See lessWhen a lonely, middle-aged Aussie long-distance truckie finds love online with a city girl, he must overcome his fear of losing what he loves most to win her heart.
That may be true in some rom-coms, Louise, when the characters are in conflict (like How to Lose a Guy In 10 Days or When Harry Met Sally) ... but your characters are not in conflict. The catalyst for your story is them falling in love. The action you are suggesting is that the trucker leaves his hoRead more
That may be true in some rom-coms, Louise, when the characters are in conflict (like How to Lose a Guy In 10 Days or When Harry Met Sally) … but your characters are not in conflict. The catalyst for your story is them falling in love. The action you are suggesting is that the trucker leaves his home and moves to the city. At this point in the story, there is no conflict – what is making their union difficult? Who is stopping the trucker from getting to the city?
See lessWhen a lonely, middle-aged Aussie long-distance truckie finds love online with a city girl, he must overcome his fear of losing what he loves most to win her heart.
It's certainly getting closer. My question about the revised logline is; who is your antagonist?
It’s certainly getting closer. My question about the revised logline is; who is your antagonist?
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