Have an account? Sign In Now
Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.
Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.
Two recusant boys have 36 hours to reach the historic return of the first spacecraft to contact alien life after their plan to surreptitiously view it in a friends dorm is obstructed by the boarding schools strictly enforced orthodox precepts.
@Richiev, dpg and Foxtrot25, your feedback is much appreciated.To falsify their strictly religious commune, two rebellious boys embroil their orthodox friend in traversing beyond the security of their commune and through the desolate zone to the unprecedented arrival of an alien vessel. (I have expaRead more
Richiev, dpg and Foxtrot25, your feedback is much appreciated.
To falsify their strictly religious commune, two rebellious boys embroil their orthodox friend in traversing beyond the security of their commune and through the desolate zone to the unprecedented arrival of an alien vessel.
(I have expanded upon the concept below, but if that is needed then?there must be something missing from the logline itself).
The way I envision the concept is more focused on the conflict between the boy’s faith and the harshness of their world. This is set to the backdrop of humankind encountering an analogous conflict between our fanciful ideas of first contact?and reality.
As Foxtrot25 suggested, kind of like the film ‘Contact’ perceived through the eyes of 3 adolescent kids from strictly religious communities.
See lessAfter finding a talisman in England’s most haunted ruin, three young boys awaken the ancient guardian of Berkshire Castle, which is hellbent on adding skulls to its collection.
Agreed, great improvement over your first draft.
Agreed, great improvement over your first draft.
See lessSurviving the crash of their plane in the Bermuda Triangle, spiritually gifted twins race their evil cyborg uncle to in a quest to find sacred elemental stones to avenge their mother’s murder and save their planet.
Wow there is a lot going on there! I think i'll focus on the most glaring issue I have:?How does the plane crash fit into this story? Do they find themselves in the race against the cyborg because their plane crashed? Or would they have ended up in the conflict even if they didn't??crash? My gut insRead more
Wow there is a lot going on there!
See lessI think i’ll focus on the most glaring issue I have:?How does the plane crash fit into this story? Do they find themselves in the race against the cyborg because their plane crashed? Or would they have ended up in the conflict even if they didn’t??crash? My gut instinct says you could probably omit the whole part about the plane crash and Bermuda and the logline would actually be better for it.