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  1. Posted: May 28, 2012In: Public

    So his injured penis can heal an alpha-male is put on libido removing medication, disrupting his win at all costs mentality and threatening his chances of becoming street luge champion.

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    Added an answer on May 31, 2012 at 2:30 pm

    Howabout: "When a confident street-luger injures his penis and is put on libido reducing meds, he must to win the championship."

    Howabout: “When a confident street-luger injures his penis and is put on libido reducing meds, he must to win the championship.”

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  2. Posted: May 31, 2012In: 01

    After the head of a giant corporation discovers a malicious conspiracy, he works by night to bring down the very company he leads by day

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    Added an answer on May 31, 2012 at 12:47 pm

    Sorry, that third question is: What does he risk and what happens if he doesn?t stop the conspiracy?

    Sorry, that third question is:
    What does he risk and what happens if he doesn?t stop the conspiracy?

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  3. Posted: May 31, 2012In: 01

    After the head of a giant corporation discovers a malicious conspiracy, he works by night to bring down the very company he leads by day

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    Added an answer on May 31, 2012 at 12:44 pm

    An interesting twist on the little guy vs big corporation genre. For some reason, when I first read it I thought... Batman! My suggestion is to be more specific! What does his corporation do? What is the conspiracy? What does he do at night to stop this conspiracy? What does he risk and what does haRead more

    An interesting twist on the little guy vs big corporation genre. For some reason, when I first read it I thought… Batman!

    My suggestion is to be more specific!

    What does his corporation do?
    What is the conspiracy?
    What does he do at night to stop this conspiracy?
    What does he risk and what does happens if he doesn’t stop the conspiracy?

    Answer these questions and try to incorporate them into your logline.

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