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The story of a boy who can teleport throughout space and time, and his eventual self-inflicted downfall.
Interesting. That's a pretty powerful boy. Almost God-like. I'd like to know more about what the story actually is. I completely agree with jamesmichael. Check out this HOW TO GUIDE if you haven?t done so! https://loglines.org/howto/
Interesting. That’s a pretty powerful boy. Almost God-like. I’d like to know more about what the story actually is.
I completely agree with jamesmichael. Check out this HOW TO GUIDE if you haven?t done so!
https://loglines.org/howto/
See lessA young rookie cop responds to noise complaint that turns sour when the offender turns out to be a mentally disturbed drug addict that forces him to take a drug that allows him to see demons.
Awesome inciting incident for a spooky supernatural thriller! I like the demon-seeing drug idea. What is the hero's goal once he sees the demons, and what must he do to accomplish it? Also, check out this "how to" if you haven't done so. https://loglines.org/howto/ I'm a big fan of the "When [a majoRead more
Awesome inciting incident for a spooky supernatural thriller! I like the demon-seeing drug idea. What is the hero’s goal once he sees the demons, and what must he do to accomplish it?
Also, check out this “how to” if you haven’t done so.
https://loglines.org/howto/
I’m a big fan of the “When [a major event happens], [the Hero], must [do the main action]” structure for loglines, because it forces the writer to think about just the essential elements.
I suggest for yours:
See lessWhen a deranged addict forces a rookie cop to take a “demon seeing” drug, he must :: DO SOMETHING ::
So his injured penis can heal an alpha-male is put on libido removing medication, disrupting his win at all costs mentality and threatening his chances of becoming street luge champion.
Sorry, I put DO SOMETHING in brackets and it didn't show. Here's what I meant to say: When a confident street-luger injures his penis and is put on libido reducing meds, he must ::DO SOMETHING:: to win the championship.? Fill in DO SOMETHING with the action he must take to overcome the effects of hiRead more
Sorry, I put DO SOMETHING in brackets and it didn’t show. Here’s what I meant to say:
When a confident street-luger injures his penis and is put on libido reducing meds, he must ::DO SOMETHING:: to win the championship.?
Fill in DO SOMETHING with the action he must take to overcome the effects of his meds, and win the championship.
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