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\"A withdrawn, abused and bullied teenager, does well to keep his various and at times genius talents well hidden from his tormentors. A chance meeting with a drifter however, changes everything.\"
Howabout this: When a bullied teenager who can :: insert genius talent here :: accidentally meets a drifter, he must :: insert action :: in order to :: insert goal ::.
Howabout this:
When a bullied teenager who can :: insert genius talent here :: accidentally meets a drifter, he must :: insert action :: in order to :: insert goal ::.
See lessA young rookie cop responds to noise complaint that turns sour when the offender turns out to be a mentally disturbed drug addict that forces him to take a drug that allows him to see demons.
Oh... interesting interpretation Invisible Hand. I assumed the demons always existed, and the drug just activates a dormant "Sixth Sense", allowing the user to see this supernatural world. Maybe that needs to be clarified in the logline.
Oh… interesting interpretation Invisible Hand. I assumed the demons always existed, and the drug just activates a dormant “Sixth Sense”, allowing the user to see this supernatural world.
Maybe that needs to be clarified in the logline.
See lessAfter a beautiful, pure-hearted Senator is invited to join a presidential campaign, she discovers the dark side of public service and viciously turns the election upside-down
Pure-heartedness vs ruthless corruption. An intriguing political drama with a strong inner journey as the main character gradually devolves from innocent to vicious. Can she redeem herself? Reminds me of Mean Girls! My recommendation is to make her goal clearer. Is she trying to win the election? FoRead more
Pure-heartedness vs ruthless corruption. An intriguing political drama with a strong inner journey as the main character gradually devolves from innocent to vicious. Can she redeem herself? Reminds me of Mean Girls!
My recommendation is to make her goal clearer. Is she trying to win the election? For herself, or for someone else?
How about something like this:
“When a pure-hearted senator is beguiled into joining an amoral presidential election, she must :: DO SOMETHING :: to win, in order to :: STAKES ::”
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