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Werewolf hunters discover an Alpha wants to eliminate them, and the veil?s pierced when their oblivious biochemist daughter realizes it?s her it wants.
A biochemist, unaware she belongs to a family of Werewolf hunters, discovers an Alpha is out to eliminate them, and add her to its pack.? I like it, this is the best one so far, as we know who the protagonist is, and the goal is implied. Nir, I don't see a problem with "add her to its pack" ... whenRead more
A biochemist, unaware she belongs to a family of Werewolf hunters, discovers an Alpha is out to eliminate them, and add her to its pack.?
I like it, this is the best one so far, as we know who the protagonist is, and the goal is implied.
Nir, I don’t see a problem with “add her to its pack” … when a werewolf bites someone, she becomes a werewolf too. I think that is part of the myth, so all good there.
Maybe give the protagonist a strength/weakness. 🙂
Here’s my take:
A shy biochemist must unite with her family of Werewolf hunters to battle a vicious Alpha, who seeks to add her to his pack.?
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A near perfect logline for an intense family drama. The MC, goal, stakes, and obstacles are all there. We immediately sympathise with the chracter's dire situation. I would watch this movie! The only thing missing is perhaps a character flaw... give the girl a weakness to overcome (e.g. is she shy,Read more
A near perfect logline for an intense family drama. The MC, goal, stakes, and obstacles are all there. We immediately sympathise with the chracter’s dire situation. I would watch this movie!
The only thing missing is perhaps a character flaw… give the girl a weakness to overcome (e.g. is she shy, headstrong?), so we’ll know to expect an exciting inner journey.
Otherwise, awesome.
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Sorry, I meant "demon revealing"
Sorry, I meant “demon revealing”
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