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  1. Posted: June 5, 2012In: Public

    Werewolf hunters discover an Alpha wants to eliminate them, and the veil?s pierced when their oblivious biochemist daughter realizes it?s her it wants.

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    Added an answer on June 12, 2012 at 1:03 am

    A biochemist, unaware she belongs to a family of Werewolf hunters, discovers an Alpha is out to eliminate them, and add her to its pack.? I like it, this is the best one so far, as we know who the protagonist is, and the goal is implied. Nir, I don't see a problem with "add her to its pack" ... whenRead more

    A biochemist, unaware she belongs to a family of Werewolf hunters, discovers an Alpha is out to eliminate them, and add her to its pack.?

    I like it, this is the best one so far, as we know who the protagonist is, and the goal is implied.

    Nir, I don’t see a problem with “add her to its pack” … when a werewolf bites someone, she becomes a werewolf too. I think that is part of the myth, so all good there.

    Maybe give the protagonist a strength/weakness. 🙂

    Here’s my take:

    A shy biochemist must unite with her family of Werewolf hunters to battle a vicious Alpha, who seeks to add her to his pack.?

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  2. Posted: June 3, 2012In: Public

    When her father disappears into Monaco city to escape his massive debt, a girl must trace him down or face an arranged marriage with the loan shark

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    Added an answer on June 3, 2012 at 6:56 pm

    A near perfect logline for an intense family drama. The MC, goal, stakes, and obstacles are all there. We immediately sympathise with the chracter's dire situation. I would watch this movie! The only thing missing is perhaps a character flaw... give the girl a weakness to overcome (e.g. is she shy,Read more

    A near perfect logline for an intense family drama. The MC, goal, stakes, and obstacles are all there. We immediately sympathise with the chracter’s dire situation. I would watch this movie!

    The only thing missing is perhaps a character flaw… give the girl a weakness to overcome (e.g. is she shy, headstrong?), so we’ll know to expect an exciting inner journey.

    Otherwise, awesome.

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  3. Posted: June 1, 2012In: Public

    A young rookie cop responds to noise complaint that turns sour when the offender turns out to be a mentally disturbed drug addict that forces him to take a drug that allows him to see demons.

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    Added an answer on June 3, 2012 at 3:59 pm

    Sorry, I meant "demon revealing"

    Sorry, I meant “demon revealing”

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