1. Posted: July 15, 2012In:

    A tragic event leads Meena to dwell into her relationship with her maid Radha.

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    You are exploring interesting ideas, but what is the main character's goal, what is at stake, and what is getting in the way of accomplishing the goal? For more help, check out the How to Write it section in www.logline.it/howto/

    You are exploring interesting ideas, but what is the main character’s goal, what is at stake, and what is getting in the way of accomplishing the goal?

    For more help, check out the How to Write it section in http://www.logline.it/howto/

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  2. Posted: July 14, 2012In:

    After witnessing her parents slaughter, Aewyn escapes the castle grounds to find her fathers allies and take back her kingdom and saving her people.

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    Ah...didn't pick up on the girl-girl angle as I had not seen Tipping the Velvet. That could be your hook.

    Ah…didn’t pick up on the girl-girl angle as I had not seen Tipping the Velvet. That could be your hook.

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  3. Posted: July 13, 2012In:

    An anime of what may have transpired in Hell while Jesus was there for 3 days.

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    Intriguing idea! But who is the main character, what is his goal, and what are the obstacles in his way? Check this out for help: www.logline.it/howto/

    Intriguing idea! But who is the main character, what is his goal, and what are the obstacles in his way? Check this out for help: http://www.logline.it/howto/

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