1. Posted: November 14, 2012In:

    When an abortionist starts using flesh from unwanted pregnancies to build a body for a god, a man must stop his girlfriend's abortion in order to destroy an ancient evil.

    patrockd

    Howabout: An pro-choice soldier must stop a demonic abortionist from using his unborn baby to ressurrect an ancient god.

    Howabout:
    An pro-choice soldier must stop a demonic abortionist from using his unborn baby to ressurrect an ancient god.

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  2. Posted: November 14, 2012In:

    When the government release swarms of drug eating insects to kill the junkie population a self-righteous policeman risks everything as he struggles to save his drug using sister from the tyrannical forces of prohibition.

    patrockd

    Dont get rid of the insects! Thats what makes this logline unique! Also, the correct grammar is "the government starts" not "start". "Drug using" is fine if thats essential to your plot. I prefer "must save" to "fights to save"...3 vs 2 words. Every word counts!

    Dont get rid of the insects! Thats what makes this logline unique!
    Also, the correct grammar is “the government starts” not “start”. “Drug using” is fine if thats essential to your plot. I prefer “must save” to “fights to save”…3 vs 2 words. Every word counts!

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  3. Posted: November 13, 2012In:

    A brilliant, genetically engineered con-artist has three days to find the scientist who programmed her to die on her twenty first birthday.

    patrockd

    Ohhhh i get it... expiration DATE haha boy am i slow. Cool add on! but why would she love the scientist who programmed her to die?

    Ohhhh i get it… expiration DATE haha boy am i slow. Cool add on! but why would she love the scientist who programmed her to die?

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