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In a world where the police can get a warrant to search your memories, a former cop is implanted with murderous false memories and must find a way to have them removed before he’s caught and his mind read.
I like the first half, then it seems to go off the rails a little and drag on. "Haunted by a guilty conscience" - is an internal battle and shouldn't really be put in a logline (but should be in a good story), stick to the external events and stakes. So I would go with the first half, then add sometRead more
I like the first half, then it seems to go off the rails a little and drag on.
“Haunted by a guilty conscience” – is an internal battle and shouldn’t really be put in a logline (but should be in a good story), stick to the external events and stakes.
So I would go with the first half, then add something about how he becomes linked and must solve the case/mystery before the man dies or he’ll die too. (but in fewer words).
It reminds me a lot of MINORITY REPORT, which is a great high-concept idea.
In a world where search warrants include the human subconscious, a psy-cop is tasked with recovering stolen information from a fatally wounded suspect?s mind, but becomes mentally-linked and must solve the case before he dies.
See lessDesperate for independence from his workaholic parents, a smart but lazy teenage boy starts his own business but discovers he must take risks to succeed.
Great point, I never thought about it that way before. It actually makes for a very compelling log line. Although truth be told, that's not exactly how events play out. It shows we can sometimes bend the events to create the most compelling version of the logline.
Great point, I never thought about it that way before. It actually makes for a very compelling log line. Although truth be told, that’s not exactly how events play out. It shows we can sometimes bend the events to create the most compelling version of the logline.
See lessDesperate for independence from his workaholic parents, a smart but lazy teenage boy starts his own business but discovers he must take risks to succeed.
Or maybe something as simple as: To avoid working, a lazy teenager attempts to start his own business, but to make a profit he?s going to have to risk losing everything.
Or maybe something as simple as:
See lessTo avoid working, a lazy teenager attempts to start his own business, but to make a profit he?s going to have to risk losing everything.