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  1. Posted: February 1, 2015In: Public

    When slobby Jim and well-groomed Leo move into student housing together, their initial personality clash evolves into an unlikely friendship as they share the triumphs and humiliations of life in Sydney.

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    Added an answer on February 5, 2015 at 4:54 am

    Your logline seems to be missing an antagonist or is one of the characters the real protagonist? Also you may consider to skip the names of the characters, since that does not give us any extra information. Then, what is their goal, and what is at stake? You should probably have something that forceRead more

    Your logline seems to be missing an antagonist or is one of the characters the real protagonist?
    Also you may consider to skip the names of the characters, since that does not give us any extra information.
    Then, what is their goal, and what is at stake? You should probably have something that force these two to be together – maybe they have to score a hard exam or something?

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  2. Posted: November 14, 2013In: Public

    A group of Marines, embedded in South Asia, embark on patrol of a remote island in search of drug runners. What they end up finding is something much more deadly and demonic than they could ever imagine.

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    Added an answer on November 21, 2013 at 5:33 pm

    Even though I find the logline interesting, technically it is missing a clear antagonist. If the story would to be set in e.g. Mexico, the island could be a sacred place for indians. In that case the antagonist could be some cacique trying to hinder the operation. - but really many horror movies areRead more

    Even though I find the logline interesting, technically it is missing a clear antagonist. If the story would to be set in e.g. Mexico, the island could be a sacred place for indians. In that case the antagonist could be some cacique trying to hinder the operation. – but really many horror movies are missing a clear antagonist.

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  3. Posted: November 21, 2013In: Public

    After a devastating solar storm, a gold reserve manager and his family must escape the city and collapse of society, unknowingly hunted by a ruthless clan-leader looking for gold.

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    Added an answer on November 21, 2013 at 5:16 pm

    As a former banker I know you're right, but I was more thinking of a "gold reserve manager" (or someone knowing exactly where the hidden reserve is). I thought that could be something unfolding later when the clan leader catches up forcing the protagonist to help him get the gold, or the protagonistRead more

    As a former banker I know you’re right, but I was more thinking of a “gold reserve manager” (or someone knowing exactly where the hidden reserve is). I thought that could be something unfolding later when the clan leader catches up forcing the protagonist to help him get the gold, or the protagonist’s family gets killed.

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