Have an account? Sign In Now
Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.
Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.
When a schizophrenic man is released from a futuristic mental institution, specializing in curing your inner ?demons?, learns that he is being hunted by an assassin, he must rely on his fragmented memories to survive.
Very good points by FFF. If your protagonist is investigating this organization because of the untimely deaths (that is, the deaths are the inciting incident) then you should reword your logline to make that clear. If not, like FFF said, your logline should include a reason why this person has decidRead more
Very good points by FFF. If your protagonist is investigating this organization because of the untimely deaths (that is, the deaths are the inciting incident) then you should reword your logline to make that clear. If not, like FFF said, your logline should include a reason why this person has decided to take action.
If your protagonist is not himself schizophrenic, then I’m not sure why his family history is relevant. If the conflict is going to be questioning whether he’s sane or not, you should address that directly. If he is himself schizophrenic, just describe him that way.
See lessAfter a mysterious new classmate places a curse on them, two teenage boys are forced to take action and unlock insidious secrets about their quaint Southern town and master their newly found gifts.
Why must they master these gifts? And if they've received gifts, where does the curse come in?
Why must they master these gifts? And if they’ve received gifts, where does the curse come in?
See lessAll hell breaks loose when an impertinent alchemist's experiment accidentally opens the gates to hell, and she stands face-to-face with Satan.
"When an impertinent alchemist enters hell in search of an elixir of life, can she find her way back out before Satan discovers her there?" How about this?
“When an impertinent alchemist enters hell in search of an elixir of life, can she find her way back out before Satan discovers her there?”
How about this?
See less