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  1. Posted: May 23, 2015In: Public

    After gaining superhuman powers, a group of wannabe heroes run into a bunch of hijinxs when they decide they’d rather be super-villains.

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    Added an answer on May 24, 2015 at 3:31 am

    This logline seems to contradict itself - can they be "wannabe heros" if they've decided to be villains? Also, I feel like the phrase "run into a bunch of hijinxs [sic - s/b 'hijinks']" could be replaced with something better - I'm not sure hijinks are something one can run into a bunch of. I like tRead more

    This logline seems to contradict itself – can they be “wannabe heros” if they’ve decided to be villains? Also, I feel like the phrase “run into a bunch of hijinxs [sic – s/b ‘hijinks’]” could be replaced with something better – I’m not sure hijinks are something one can run into a bunch of.

    I like the concept of having your protagonist get superpowers and decide to use them for villainy, that’s interesting.

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