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Extraterrestrial monsters destroy humanity, save for an obstinate survivalist who vows revenge.
Thanks Nir, I appreciate the advice you've given regarding character goals. I've made a revision, can you tell me if you think it makes for a clearer plot? Does this still need more detail? "During an alien invasion a fainthearted survivalist flees to a retreat he's prepared in the woods, but when oRead more
Thanks Nir, I appreciate the advice you’ve given regarding character goals. I’ve made a revision, can you tell me if you think it makes for a clearer plot? Does this still need more detail?
“During an alien invasion a fainthearted survivalist flees to a retreat he’s prepared in the woods, but when one of the tentacled interlopers stumbles across his camp he’s forced to fight, or risk discovery.”
See lessAfter an undercover hammerhead shark agent and his white shark crime boss bump their heads against a Japanese wale ship, the hammerhead thinks he?s a dolphin and starts giving dolphin therapy to his traumatised boss, who ? after witnessing the whale slaughter ? doesn?t want to kill big fish anymore.
What's the main conflict in the film? I'm guessing it's a cops versus criminals thing, but that doesn't really come through in the logline, you just state that they're an undercover and a crime boss without relating about that story - find your conflict, focus on that, and try and cut the rest.
What’s the main conflict in the film? I’m guessing it’s a cops versus criminals thing, but that doesn’t really come through in the logline, you just state that they’re an undercover and a crime boss without relating about that story – find your conflict, focus on that, and try and cut the rest.
See lessAfter an undercover hammerhead shark agent and his white shark crime boss bump their heads against a Japanese wale ship, the hammerhead thinks he?s a dolphin and starts giving dolphin therapy to his traumatised boss, who ? after witnessing the whale slaughter ? doesn?t want to kill big fish anymore.
"Analyze Fish" is an amazing title.
“Analyze Fish” is an amazing title.
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