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SHORT: When a bank robbery goes wrong, a naive and desperate young man has 3 hours to retrieve the stolen money in order to save his grandmother?s life, while being chased by the entire police force of his small town.
If he stole the money, why does he have to retrieve the money? I think an important story element is missing from the logline and it's leaving us a little confused.
If he stole the money, why does he have to retrieve the money? I think an important story element is missing from the logline and it’s leaving us a little confused.
See lessThe coming-of-age stories of a swashbuckling pirate, a rebellious princess, and an adventuring cuisinier.
Who is the lead character? What is their goal? What is standing in their way? (And what is a cuisinier?)
Who is the lead character?
What is their goal?
What is standing in their way?
(And what is a cuisinier?)
See lessThis is my logline for a short from spanish to english
"When he is forced to transport the dead body of a child, an out of work man must..." (Then tell us what he must do)
“When he is forced to transport the dead body of a child, an out of work man must…” (Then tell us what he must do)
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