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  1. Posted: September 17, 2018In: Horror

    As a gang-ravaged inner-city estate is torn apart by a feral beast that feeds on hate and violence, one man trying to renounce his brutal past, must make his way through the bone shattering carnage to find his daughter.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 18, 2018 at 3:26 am

    You should begin the logline with what set's the story in motion. It sounds as if his daughter being in trouble is what sets the story in motion because his goal is to rescue her. The question is, rescue her from what? Did she get captured by the beast? ----------------------------------------------Read more

    You should begin the logline with what set’s the story in motion.

    It sounds as if his daughter being in trouble is what sets the story in motion because his goal is to rescue her.

    The question is, rescue her from what? Did she get captured by the beast?
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    “When his daughter is captured by a feral beast that feeds on hate and violence, former gang leader turned preacher must navigate a gang-riddled slum to confront the creature and rescue his daughter.”

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  2. Posted: September 16, 2018In: Examples

    When an NYC lawyer fails to brush off his emotionally unstable one-night stand, he must protect his family from her frenzied attempts to replace them.

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    Added an answer on September 16, 2018 at 7:54 am

    "When his one-night stand becomes a full-time nightmare,?an?NYC lawyer must defend his family from his scorned lover's attempt at revenge."

    “When his one-night stand becomes a full-time nightmare,?an?NYC lawyer must defend his family from his scorned lover’s attempt at revenge.”

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  3. Posted: September 11, 2018In: Coming of Age

    A rich-turned-poor senior student at an elite Manhattan prep school becomes desperate for her dream college-tuition money, so she?s forced to take a miserable long hours-low pay job at the Coney Island?s rundown amusement park.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 12, 2018 at 9:33 pm

    "When her family loses it all, a spoiled rich girl gets a secret job at Coney Island in order to pay for her prep school tuition."

    “When her family loses it all, a spoiled rich girl gets a secret job at Coney Island in order to pay for her prep school tuition.”

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