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  1. Posted: October 2, 2018In: Examples

    When a drunk jingle writer repeatedly gets into bar fights, judge order him to anger management and mentor a trouble youth with a beautiful natural singing voice, if he doesn’t he will lose his income, family and go to jail.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on October 2, 2018 at 10:24 am

    "After a judge orders him to community service, an alcoholic jingle writer is forced to tutor a troubled and annoying singer with a beautiful voice, but failure in his duty and he will go directly to jail and not pass go." ----- Possible title: Passing Go (I changed it to community service because IRead more

    “After a judge orders him to community service, an alcoholic jingle writer is forced to tutor a troubled and annoying singer with a beautiful voice, but failure in his duty and he will go directly to jail and not pass go.”
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    Possible title: Passing Go

    (I changed it to community service because I don’t think a judge would allow someone with an anger problem around kids)

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  2. Posted: September 28, 2018In: Student Loglines

    After falling in love a doctor while recovering in a hospital a woman find out she’s in coma. Now she must decide, will she wake up and go back to her life or will she stay?

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 28, 2018 at 8:42 am

    This is going to come out of left field:---------------------------------------------"After her mother falls into a coma,? a?shattered daughter must use an experimental?treatment to enter her mom's brain to convince her to?give up the fantasy world she has created and return to the real world ."----Read more

    This is going to come out of left field:
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    “After her mother falls into a coma,? a?shattered daughter must use an experimental?treatment to enter her mom’s brain to convince her to?give up the fantasy world she has created and return to the real world .”
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    I added a daughter because you have created a situation. The situation is, a woman is in a coma and can’t decide whether to live in the fantasy she has created or come back to the real world. I have placed a lead character with a strong goal into that situation; A daughter who must convince her mother to give up the fantasy and return to the real world or else be lost forever.

    However, this is so different from what is in your logline I understand you may not want to go this direction.

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  3. Posted: September 22, 2018In: Crime

    A simple disagreement in a gas station results in a store manager being brutally murdered. A dubious employee can’t accept the official explanation and asks one too many questions, sparking a series of events that could ruin him completely.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 22, 2018 at 3:40 pm

    Who all?

    Who all?

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