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When a gigantic firestorm burns through a family’s horse ranch in October 2003, the miracles it leaves behind bring Grant, an accomplished physicist, to the brink of believing in something more powerful than science.
A logline should tell the reader who's the lead character, what they want, and what's standing in their way. Because I don't know what your lead character wants, it's difficult to tell what the story is about. I can see it has something to do with magic apples, but not sure what the magic apples doRead more
A logline should tell the reader who’s the lead character, what they want, and what’s standing in their way.
Because I don’t know what your lead character wants, it’s difficult to tell what the story is about.
I can see it has something to do with magic apples, but not sure what the magic apples do nor what the lead character plans on doing with the magic apples now that he has them.
Anyway, this is just a critique of the logline, not the story itself.
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What is the main goal of the protagonist, and what is standing in his way?
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