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A selfish drunkard is forced to run a startup and fight powerful government agencies after he inherits it from his righteous entrepreneur best friend who died mysteriously.
You should always think about writing the logline from the perspective of the lead character: for instance.You write (Revision 1): A righteous entrepreneur dies mysteriously while battling autocratic leader...From the lead character's point of view: When his best friend is murdered while battling anRead more
You should always think about writing the logline from the perspective of the lead character: for instance.
You write (Revision 1): A righteous entrepreneur dies mysteriously while battling autocratic leader…
From the lead character’s point of view: When his best friend is murdered while battling an autocratic leader…
See lessA selfish drunkard is forced to run a startup and fight powerful government agencies after he inherits it from his righteous entrepreneur best friend who died mysteriously.
Your story begins with a best friend who dies mysteriously, but you put that at the end of your logline. You should start the logline with what sets the story in motion.
Your story begins with a best friend who dies mysteriously, but you put that at the end of your logline.
You should start the logline with what sets the story in motion.
See lessA cynical sellsword joins forces with a mysterious traveler to conceal a wish-granting treasure when he learns that the King who hired him to find it will use it to become an all-powerful tyrant.
You need to make this personal to the lead character
You need to make this personal to the lead character
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