1. Posted: December 26, 2017In:

    pls comment on it

    Richiev Singularity

    In a logline it?s better, to begin with, what sets the story in motion rather than end with it. ?When his daughter contracts cancer, a desperate?teacher??

    In a logline it?s better, to begin with, what sets the story in motion rather than end with it.

    ?When his daughter contracts cancer, a desperate?teacher??

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  2. Posted: December 24, 2017In:

    A Rescue Story

    Richiev Singularity

    This is short enough you could probably add a detail or two. by detail I mean, does he have to find some magical armor? or a dragon killing bow? or scale an unscaleable mountain or train with a reclusive warrior? Also, you should begin your logline with the incident that sets the story in motion. BuRead more

    This is short enough you could probably add a detail or two. by detail I mean, does he have to find some magical armor? or a dragon killing bow? or scale an unscaleable mountain or train with a reclusive warrior?

    Also, you should begin your logline with the incident that sets the story in motion.

    But other than that I get the gist of the story from your short but to the point logline.

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  3. Posted: December 21, 2017In:

    tittle:_” impenetrable” the desperate high school teacher kidnap his student and ask her family huge amount of money for his only daughter for cancer diagnosis

    Richiev Singularity

    In a logline it's better, to begin with, what sets the story in motion rather than end with it. "When his daughter contracts cancer, a desperate?teacher..."

    In a logline it’s better, to begin with, what sets the story in motion rather than end with it.

    “When his daughter contracts cancer, a desperate?teacher…”

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