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A guy walks in a bar to find himself in the middle of a heist.
At least make it a priest and a rabbi. "When a priest and a rabbi walk into a bar only to find themselves in the midst of a hostage situation, they must use their long-forgotten?military training to take out the bad guys and save the day!!!" See, now the punchline is the two men are, Arnold SchwartzRead more
At least make it a priest and a rabbi.
“When a priest and a rabbi walk into a bar only to find themselves in the midst of a hostage situation, they must use their long-forgotten?military training to take out the bad guys and save the day!!!”
See, now the punchline is the two men are, Arnold Schwartzenegger and Sylvester Stallone, two former marines who just happen to be men of God.
See less“The Wedding Killer” In small town of Delaware The young police officer investigating , a case of murder in brides one day before their wedding day
In a small town, a murder would be a big event. Murders very seldom happen in small towns. Therefore it would be unlikely they would give the case to a 'young' police officer. That doesn't mean you cannot have a young police officer as your lead character. But you should personalize it. Have the murRead more
In a small town, a murder would be a big event. Murders very seldom happen in small towns.
See lessTherefore it would be unlikely they would give the case to a ‘young’ police officer.
That doesn’t mean you cannot have a young police officer as your lead character.
But you should personalize it.
Have the murdered bride be his sister, that way he is determined to solve the case in spite?being told to back off.
possible fiction-thriller “the quarry” (MITH)
Your logline is unclear what your lead character must do. Adding that will help improve your logline. ----- "After the mysterious death of several miners, a site operation manager must..." "After discovering a deadly unworldly?mineral, a site operation manager must..."
Your logline is unclear what your lead character must do. Adding that will help improve your logline.
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“After the mysterious death of several miners, a site operation manager must…”
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