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A bounty hunter and a renegade race against the power-hungry to find an utopia lost in time.
If the story begins with your lead killing a corrupt noble. That should be in the logline.
If the story begins with your lead killing a corrupt noble. That should be in the logline.
See lessA bounty hunter and a renegade race against the power-hungry to find an utopia lost in time.
Why?
Why?
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You are missing two of the biggest elements of a logline1: Goal--- you haven't given your lead character a goal2: Conflict--- Story is conflict, once your lead character has a goal, something needs to stand in?way of that goal. Since you haven't given us a goal, naturally you are also lacking confliRead more
You are missing two of the biggest elements of a logline
1: Goal— you haven’t given your lead character a goal
2: Conflict— Story is conflict, once your lead character has a goal, something needs to stand in?way of that goal. Since you haven’t given us a goal, naturally you are also lacking conflict.
What is the goal of the lead character, what is standing in his or her way?
Adding those two elements will greatly improve your logline.
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