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  1. Posted: January 25, 2018In: Drama

    Realizing his company is in danger of losing unpopularity, due to competition with his arch nemesis. A young successful fashion marketer contracts a plan to steal one of his high ranked female supermodels in order to boost his sales, only to grow unexpected feelings that could lead him into losing his business as a whole.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on January 25, 2018 at 8:22 pm

    Also, you should write a little more decisively?for the purpose of the logline Instead of: Realizing his company is in danger of losing unpopularity This: When his company loses popularity Losing popularity is far more compelling than the possibility of losing popularity.

    Also, you should write a little more decisively?for the purpose of the logline

    Instead of: Realizing his company is in danger of losing unpopularity
    This: When his company loses popularity

    Losing popularity is far more compelling than the possibility of losing popularity.

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  2. Posted: January 25, 2018In: Drama

    Realizing his company is in danger of losing unpopularity, due to competition with his arch nemesis. A young successful fashion marketer contracts a plan to steal one of his high ranked female supermodels in order to boost his sales, only to grow unexpected feelings that could lead him into losing his business as a whole.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on January 25, 2018 at 8:17 pm

    I am confused by the term, 'losing unpopularity' If you lose unpopularity, that would make you popular, I would think popularity would be a good thing, so I can only assume you mean something else.

    I am confused by the term, ‘losing unpopularity’
    If you lose unpopularity, that would make you popular, I would think popularity would be a good thing, so I can only assume you mean something else.

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  3. Posted: January 24, 2018In: Drama

    Due to IVF and genetic changes humanity only exist in the future as twins or multiple births. A self-proclaimed leader decides that the natural balance has to be restored by what he calls natural selection. The tormented genius ?Daggy? Pollux fights against the execution of his love interest who’s been selected as the weaker one.

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    Added an answer on January 24, 2018 at 1:07 pm

    Your logline focuses on the setup of the story and not the story itself. What happens when the lead characters love interest is sentenced to die? What must he do to save her??What specific action?

    Your logline focuses on the setup of the story and not the story itself.

    What happens when the lead characters love interest is sentenced to die?
    What must he do to save her??What specific action?

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