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A young ex basketball player finds himself falling in love with his best friend, but being feared to hurt her due to his post-traumatic stress disorder, he must learn to cope in order to move forward with her before he lose her for good.
(When he) finds himself falling in love with his best friend (When he) falls for his best friend Fewer words are better than more. Always look for ways to say the same thing but with fewer words. Less is more
(When he) finds himself falling in love with his best friend
(When he) falls for his best friend
Fewer words are better than more. Always look for ways to say the same thing but with fewer words.
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A young ex basketball player finds himself falling in love with his best friend, but being feared to hurt her due to his post-traumatic stress disorder, he must learn to cope in order to move forward with her before he lose her for good.
Just curious, is being an 'ex-basketball player' important to the story? If it is important then, by all means, keep it in the logline However, it seems as though being an ex-marine or ex-soldier would be more relevant since the lead has PTSD.
Just curious, is being an ‘ex-basketball player’ important to the story?
See lessIf it is important then, by all means, keep it in the logline
However, it seems as though being an ex-marine or ex-soldier would be more relevant since the lead has PTSD.
When her daughter is kidnapped at a local convenience store, Midge Phaeton must bring the sex trafficking to its knees, but when she is caught, and beaten to a pulp, she must outsmart the traffickers in order to save her daughter from being exploited or killed.
If it's not in the logline, it's not in the logline...There may be times when you might hint at things in a logline but elements like conflict (As dpg?points out) and stakes, should be clear from reading a logline.You should be specific about why delivering the car in 24 hours is a difficult?task, aRead more
If it’s not in the logline, it’s not in the logline…
There may be times when you might hint at things in a logline but elements like conflict (As dpg?points out) and stakes, should be clear from reading a logline.
You should be specific about why delivering the car in 24 hours is a difficult?task, and you should state it clearly in the logline…
Also; Is this a road movie like the ‘Gumball Rally’? where the protagonist?has to drive a very long distance in a short period of time or is this a chase movie like ‘Hit and Run” or ‘Smoky and the bandit? where in order to accomplish the goal the lead must stay away from the bad guy?
In other words, what is standing in the lead characters way?
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