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  1. Posted: March 2, 2018In: Drama

    Forced to selling her life over by a mean spirited Crip, a cold hearted street dancer, must rise above , in order to be with a successful photographer who is the only one capable of bringing her peace and love.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on March 3, 2018 at 1:47 pm

    Honestly the story about being forced into a life debt sound far more interesting than the love story. ----------------------------------------------------------- When she is forced into a life debt by the unscrupulous man who saved her life,? an honor-bound amateur?dancer searches for a way out whiRead more

    Honestly the story about being forced into a life debt sound far more interesting than the love story.
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    When she is forced into a life debt by the unscrupulous man who saved her life,? an honor-bound amateur?dancer searches for a way out while being compelled to take compromising photos of her corrupt ‘saviors’ enemies”

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  2. Posted: March 2, 2018In: Drama

    Forced to selling her life over by a mean spirited Crip, a cold hearted street dancer, must rise above , in order to be with a successful photographer who is the only one capable of bringing her peace and love.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on March 3, 2018 at 9:36 am

    Forced to selling (Sell) her life over... What does this mean in practical terms? Are you talking prostitution, or are you talking a bad airtight contract of some sort?Must rise above... Rise above what? This should probably be droppedin order to be with a successful photographer... How does this reRead more

    Forced to selling (Sell) her life over… What does this mean in practical terms? Are you talking prostitution, or are you talking a bad airtight contract of some sort?

    Must rise above… Rise above what? This should probably be dropped

    in order to be with a successful photographer… How does this relate to selling her life over?

    You have an inciting incident and you have a goal, so that is good, I am just not sure how they relate to one another.
    I think with a little clarity this will be a much better logline.

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  3. Posted: February 24, 2018In: Drama

    After losing her partner in dance competition and being stuck in physical therapy for her injuries, the girl must find another partner to win the upcoming competition in which her coach suggested a perfectly skilled street fighter with no dance experience.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on February 27, 2018 at 9:22 am

    Dance-Fu

    Dance-Fu

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