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After a crazed general conquers the mystical rainmakers, a bullied boy must raise a rebellion to defeat him, before another ?Noah?s? flood wipes out humanity.
One more thing.Another reason you should make your hero a part of the mystical rainmakers, (besides making the story personal)is because the lead character's goal should be to find the legendary 'song of the sun' that will stop the rain,and the only one who has the power to sing the song is the bullRead more
One more thing.
Another reason you should make your hero a part of the mystical rainmakers, (besides making the story personal)
is because the lead character’s goal should be to find the legendary ‘song of the sun’ that will stop the rain,
and the only one who has the power to sing the song is the bullied teen.
You see, he was bullied because he could never create rain no matter how hard he sang and danced.
See lessThe other kids made fun of him.
That’s because he has the power of the sun, he is a sun maker. The one who can bring the sun and stop the rain.
He just doesn’t know it yet.
He searches for the legendary song of the sun to stop the rain
When the power to bring the sun was inside him all along.
He is the song.
After a crazed general conquers the mystical rainmakers, a bullied boy must raise a rebellion to defeat him, before another ?Noah?s? flood wipes out humanity.
You should connect the inciting incident to the lead character in some way in order to make the goal personal to your hero. -------------------------- "When his village of rainmakers is conquered by a crazed Admiral determined to create a new "Noah's Flood" a bullied teen must raise a rebellion to sRead more
You should connect the inciting incident to the lead character in some way in order to make the goal personal to your hero.
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“When his village of rainmakers is conquered by a crazed Admiral determined to create a new “Noah’s Flood” a bullied teen must raise a rebellion to stop the evil commander before all humanity is drowned except those in the evil fleet”
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In my logline example I make the hero part of the conquered village, now the hero has a personal stake in defeating the bad guy.
After a lovesick flight attendant and the wife of a doppelganger of a famous actor becomes pregnant by him, he sets out to convince them to share a home with him.
This is written?in such a way that I am not sure who is who. Also, I am not sure you have actually written any conflict into your logline.
This is written?in such a way that I am not sure who is who.
See lessAlso, I am not sure you have actually written any conflict into your logline.