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When dad goes bankrupt, one percenter Adam Lewis must learn to live within his means.
"When dad goes bankrupt a spoiled trust-fund baby must do the one thing he never ever wanted to do, get a job"
“When dad goes bankrupt a spoiled trust-fund baby must do the one thing he never ever wanted to do, get a job”
See lessA rookie Senator facing his first vote reevaluates his platform and priorities when his wife is murdered in a mass shooting.
You buried the lead "When his wife is killed in a mass shooting, a rookie senator faces off against his own party's platform to insure it will never happen again."
You buried the lead
“When his wife is killed in a mass shooting, a rookie senator faces off against his own party’s platform to insure it will never happen again.”
See lessSeduced into a world of drugs, sex, and money after abandoning her loved ones, model-slash-actress hopeful must determine if losing herself, is worth it to become a star.
This logline needs that one extra thing.Is there something in your script that stands out?because the naive girl who goes to Hollywood and get's hooked on drugs and sex has been done. As a result your logline you need something that makes your story stand out from the rest.Not saying this isn't a grRead more
This logline needs that one extra thing.
Is there something in your script that stands out?
because the naive girl who goes to Hollywood and get’s hooked on drugs and sex has been done.
As a result your logline you need something that makes your story stand out from the rest.
Not saying this isn’t a great premise. just that you need something in ?your logline to grab the reader.
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