1. Posted: July 16, 2017In:

    After a young businessman is told that he is a loser and his life is lonely and meaningless, he must discover what makes an individual feel loved in order to give his life more purpose.

    Richiev Singularity

    How does he achieve his goal? I am a big fan of "The Razors Edge" in which the protagonist, who is searching for the meaning of life, goes to India. What does your lead character have to 'do' to discover meaning?

    How does he achieve his goal?

    I am a big fan of “The Razors Edge” in which the protagonist, who is searching for the meaning of life, goes to India. What does your lead character have to ‘do’ to discover meaning?

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  2. Posted: July 11, 2017In:

    When a girl falls in love with an alien, she must fight to stop the government and developers from destroying the lake that keeps him alive. This is a mixed genre – Thriller/Sci-Fi/Romance.

    Richiev Singularity

    I think the government destroying the lake would be the inciting incident. "When a greedy land developer threatens to destroy the lake of her Alien lover..." Also, you describe the lead character as a 'girl' you might want to give us a couple word description of personality.

    I think the government destroying the lake would be the inciting incident.

    “When a greedy land developer threatens to destroy the lake of her Alien lover…”

    Also, you describe the lead character as a ‘girl’ you might want to give us a couple word description of personality.

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  3. Posted: June 29, 2017In:

    After the death of a longtime friend, a man’s forgotten imagination is rekindled by his daughter.

    Richiev Singularity

    For clarity, is the daughter, the lead characters daughter, or is it the daughter of the friend, because it can be read both ways?

    For clarity, is the daughter, the lead characters daughter, or is it the daughter of the friend, because it can be read both ways?

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