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Terrified of his parents suspicions, a freshly outed gay high school senior must get a girlfriend so his parents will think he is straight.
I think a comical bit you could add to the story would be; even though his parents are traditional Christians who believe homosexuality is a sin... They are completely oblivious to who is gay,His mom has every Liberace album, "He is such a wonderful piano player, and so flamboyant, I just love his cRead more
I think a comical bit you could add to the story would be; even though his parents are traditional Christians who believe homosexuality is a sin… They are completely oblivious to who is gay,
His mom has every Liberace album, “He is such a wonderful piano player, and so flamboyant, I just love his costumes.” “He’s gay mom” “I know he must be a very happy fellow” “No I mean he’s gay” “Oh don’t be silly”
Maybe he and his friend have a ‘sleepover’ and his mom catches them ‘wrestling’ in bed. “Oh boys will be boys, now time for sleep, you boys need to get your rest if you are to go to the YMCA tomorrow”
DPG is right though, you do need an antagonist.
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See lessAn immature government programmer’s promotion is denied by his overbearing boss, so he resorts to childish pranks with his beleaguered coworkers in the hope he’ll get transferred.
"They must fight dirty to keep their jobs..." is a bit clunky. I would start by changing that section of the logline.
“They must fight dirty to keep their jobs…” is a bit clunky. I would start by changing that section of the logline.
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When he fails to pay his mobbed backed bookie, a TV sports celeb must (Do this thing) in order to (accomplish this goal)
When he fails to pay his mobbed backed bookie, a TV sports celeb must (Do this thing) in order to (accomplish this goal)
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