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  1. Posted: July 21, 2014In: Public

    A temple virgin uncovers a secret that the high priest would rather conceal: the Day of Atonement isn't working anymore. When he marries her off to a hundred year-old man, she loses everything she's ever known. Now she must find a way to prevent another unjust marriage — and restore the Atonement — before it's too late.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on July 21, 2014 at 11:30 am

    You have two inciting incidents in the logline. She uncovers a secret When she's married off to a hundred year-old man I would concentrate on the 'day of atonement' angle for the logline and keep the 'forced marriage' story for the script itself. ----- "When a devout temple virgin discovers the 'DayRead more

    You have two inciting incidents in the logline.

    She uncovers a secret
    When she’s married off to a hundred year-old man

    I would concentrate on the ‘day of atonement’ angle for the logline and keep the ‘forced marriage’ story for the script itself.
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    “When a devout temple virgin discovers the ‘Day of Atonement’ isn’t working, she must battle against the power-hungry high priest who will stop at nothing to keep her knowledge a secret.”
    —–
    Hope that helped, good luck with this!

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  2. Posted: July 18, 2014In: Public

    After a womanising snowboarder tricks a vengeful witch into sleeping with him by making outlandish promises, she curses him and the only cure is to fulfill every one of his deceptive vows.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on July 21, 2014 at 11:23 am

    lol, you beat me to it Valentin, The Witch should be the mother of the girl he tricks into bed :)

    lol, you beat me to it Valentin, The Witch should be the mother of the girl he tricks into bed 🙂

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  3. Posted: July 18, 2014In: Public

    After a womanising snowboarder tricks a vengeful witch into sleeping with him by making outlandish promises, she curses him and the only cure is to fulfill every one of his deceptive vows.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on July 21, 2014 at 11:23 am

    lol, you beat me to it Valentin, The Witch should be the mother of the girl he tricks into bed :)

    lol, you beat me to it Valentin, The Witch should be the mother of the girl he tricks into bed 🙂

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