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A young, hot-headed loner must embark on a dark, twisted odyssey in Miami to rescue his sister from being forced into prostitution by mysterious kidnappers.
You use a lot of extra words in your logline. ------------------------------------------------------------ "When his sister is kidnapped a hothead must rescue her before she's forced into prostitution."
You use a lot of extra words in your logline.
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“When his sister is kidnapped a hothead must rescue her before she’s forced into prostitution.”
1. When domestic violence is unleashed on her 24 year old self, the social media-ite must defuse his assaults before she’s loved to death.
I don't know what you mean by, 'defuse his assaults'? 'Defuse his assaults' would mean to lessen the severity of his assaults. Make them so they don't hurt as much, so she can live with being assaulted. That seems like either a weird goal or a strange wording of the logline. (Probably the second) --Read more
I don’t know what you mean by, ‘defuse his assaults’?
‘Defuse his assaults’ would mean to lessen the severity of his assaults. Make them so they don’t hurt as much, so she can live with being assaulted.
That seems like either a weird goal or a strange wording of the logline. (Probably the second)
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See less“When her boyfriend assaults her after a night of partying, a Youtuber must…” (Then tell us what your lead must do)
When an adventurous village boy is sought-after by a giant for tricking his dragon friend, he must venture into the unknown to stop the giant’s plans to destroy the village.
If the boy tricks the Dragon, why isn't it the dragon who demands that the village give the boy for sacrifice? Or, if the Giant is needed to make the story work, then why isn't the Giant the one that the boy tricks? Why is it that, Character A, tricks Character B, then out of nowhere Character C getRead more
If the boy tricks the Dragon, why isn’t it the dragon who demands that the village give the boy for sacrifice?
Or, if the Giant is needed to make the story work, then why isn’t the Giant the one that the boy tricks?
Why is it that, Character A, tricks Character B, then out of nowhere Character C gets mad and wants revenge?
Just curious
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